May 6, 2008

Melville or Hawthorne?

Although this is the second article I read this month about "last words" that centers on Randy Pausch, the author of "The Last Lecture," I enjoyed the premise of Jill Rosen's story in today’s Sun. I was very disturbed, however, about the inaccurate information in the “Last Words” text box. Herman Melville wrote "Moby Dick," not Nathaniel Hawthorne, who wrote "The Scarlet Letter." Since both of these works are still taught in many high schools in this area and across the country, I find this mistake to be both unexpected and troubling.

-- Rosemary Rappa

A. From Deputy Managing Editor Paul Moore:

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May 1, 2008

Positive feedback

A recent comment from a reader:

I grew up on the Washington Post, which is why I was surprised to realize recently that the Baltimore Sun is doing a much better job at regional and national news than any other major paper that I peruse regularly. Reading The Sun I learn about tornadoes in Virginia, Capitol Hill developments, economic development on the mid-Atlantic seaboard, lots of stuff. All that without sifting through reams of re-hashed garbage. And when I turn to the politics and opinion pages, Its not nearly as repetitive and pandering as the same pages in competing papers. To be specific, I'm really sick of hearing about Jeremiah Wright. I get it. I think everybody gets it, and if they don't, saying the same things over again isn't going to help. The past few days haven't been quite as good ("Wright media blitz could hurt Obama" April 29, "Obama Severs Ties with Former Pastor, April 30). But at least The Sun seems to make an effort to make sure they actually have something new to say each time they publish an article. Kudos to The Sun and its staff for being an original, independent news source, and not taking its cues from Fox News like so many others.

Craig Bettenhausen, Baltimore

April 29, 2008

Baby elephant story and a choice of words

Q. I really enjoyed the recent article about the "coming out party" for the Baltimore Zoo's baby elephant, Samson. Stephanie Desmon's description of the excited crowds at the zoo was excellent. A good example was this phrase: "the pint-sized pachyderm got something else -- a name." However, the headline, "340-lb. toddler debuts at zoo. Elephant presented to fawning crowds," bothered me. The crowds were not "fawning." As Ms. Desmon says in her article, the crowds were "adoring." I should know because I was there. Doesn't The Sun know the difference?
Mrs. R. Butrynski

A. From Deputy Managing Editor Paul Moore

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April 28, 2008

Article on William Donald Schaefer

Q. I cringed when I saw the article in Saturday's paper, "Schaefer moves, reluctantly Former governor settles at Charlestown." For anyone who has dealt with the issues of the elderly giving up their homes and moving into assisted living or retirement complexes, it is one the most difficult, painful and personal experiences for any elderly person and their family. So even though Mr. Schaefer is a famous politician, I initially thought this article was a big invasion of his privacy. After reading it, however, I changed my mind. The reporter, Laura Vozzella, wrote it in such a way that did not embarrass Mr. Schaefer. The article also provided useful information for anyone who is facing this situation. What could have been insensitive turned out just the opposite.

- Emily Clugston

A. From Assistant Managing Editor Howard Libit: 

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April 22, 2008

Fewer pages in the Maryland section?

Q. Since you have included classified ads in the Maryland section, there seem to be fewer pages of news than before. Is this true?
-Jim McGovern

A. From Deputy Managing Editor Paul Moore:

Actually not. Adding classified to the section obviously has increased the total number of pages, which more often than not provides more space and more pages for news. It partly depends on the number of classified obituaries each day, but on average the Maryland section has as many, if not more, pages for news than before. There are, however, certain days when a heavy number of classified ads can "squeeze" the news hole a bit, which can reduce the space available for articles.

April 18, 2008

The Sun and the Examiner on sludge

Q. I've noticed that The Examiner has given a lot of attention (including front-page coverage) to HUD's decision to fund a program that spread sludge on the lawns of some houses in East Baltimore. The articles contend that this program -- designed to combat lead poisoning -- may have serious safety implications for residents. In contrast, The Sun has given this situation very modest attention. I'm curious why. Is it because you don't think it's important or that The Examiner is making too big a deal out of it?
John Greenspan

A. From Assistant Managing Editor Jon Morgan

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April 14, 2008

Awful accident story?

The article "Three accidents tangle JFX traffic” on page 6B of the Sunday Sun was one of the most poorly written articles in recent memory. A middle school English student could do a better job. Some editing – please!

-Miriam Mittenthal

A. From Assistant Managing Editor/Copy Desk John McIntyre:

The story is no model of expository prose, but otherwise not anything out of the way of routine police/traffic reporting. There are no errors in grammar. "Taxicab" should be one word, and "expressway" is capitalized once when it shouldn't have been, but neither is a hanging offense. I wonder whether the reader is irritated the information in the article is sketchy. That, of course, is not our doing; we printed what the police were able or willing to give.

April 9, 2008

Spelling mistake

Q. Has The Sun discovered a new way to spell Tennessee? That is the impression you gave when the headline at the top of the front page about the Lady Vols winning the NCAA championship said "Tennesee."
-Richard Gitler

A. From Deputy Managing Editor Paul Moore:

No, The Sun was not offering a new spelling. It was a serious mistake that should never had made it into print. Our proofreading process is designed to catch such mistakes, and obviously it did not work in this instance. We will endeavor to ensure that it never happens again. Our apologies.

April 7, 2008

Disappointed in Catonsville

Q. As we have a store in Catonsville, we were very excited to see the article in today's paper about shopping in Catonsville. As I began reading, I was shocked how you could have completely omitted our family owned store, "Cy's of Catonsville," which has been here at 719 Frederick Rd. for 68 years, longer than any of the other stores you highlighted. My father, Marvin Meyer, is turning 82 years old this week & is still working full time here. Our Mom, 77 years old, is also working with us, too. There has been articles written about them & my Dad was once on the cover of Baltimore Magazine. We have a very unique store, as we carry swimwear for the entire family - from infants to women's size 32 & men's 5X year round. We are well known in the swim team community, as well as with all those who do water aerobics & water physical therapy. Along with the swim wear, we rent and sell tuxedoes. Those new to our store often want to hear the story as to how this came to be. How could you have been right here & not even be curious about our store & consider us as a point of interest?
<strong>Karen Miller</strong>
   
A. From reporter Stephanie Shapiro:
Dear Karen, My apologies for missing Cy's. During my day in Catonsville, I wandered in and out of a variety of shops, but didn't go into yours. I confess I knew nothing about it. I'm hoping that people who read the story and come to explore Catonsville will be more observant than I am and pay a visit to your store. Had I known more about it, I would have done the same.
 

March 31, 2008

Confusing reference in an article

Q. It is now 8:58 p.m. on Sunday evening. This line appears in the news story posted or updated 10 minutes ago about the Marriott murders: "Noting a fatal building collapse that also occurred today, Scriber said: 'It's been a terrible day for the city' " I have searched the site for news about this, but cannot find anything about a building collapse today.

Eileen O'Brien

A. From Matthew Baise, editor of baltimoresun.com:

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