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Woke up mildly feverish twice during the night and decided this morning, aching all over, to stay home from the paragraph factory today. But that does not mean that you are to be spared miscellaneous remarks.
Aw, shucks: Baltimore magazine lists You Don’t Say as one of its three favorite Sun blogs, along with David Zurawik’s Z on TV and Jill Rosen’s Unleashed.
Mencken: As I work through H.L. Mencken’s Prejudices series in the new Library of America edition, I have to keep reminding myself that what is wrote is nearly a century old: “For what the public wants—at least the American public—is rough work. It delights in vituperation. It revels in scandal. It is always on the side of the man or journal making the charges, no matter how slight the probability that the accused is guilty.”
Not edifying: Now that the New York City landmarks commission has removed an obstacle to the construction of a community center and mosque near the former site of the World Trade Center, we can expect to hear even louder braying against it from people portraying themselves as conservatives. What I wonder, without expecting to receive any explanation, is how these defenders of the Constitution in all its majesty square their opposition to this project with the First Amendment’s guarantee of the free exercise of religion.
Add to your vocabulary: Fritinancy draws attention to the word glurge, coined in 1998 to describe cloyingly sentimental stories typically circulated on the Internet. Patricia Chapin of Snopes.com, that invaluable exposer of bogus material, to describe the physical reaction—retching to such stories. Snopes, in fact, devotes an entire section to glurgery.
Snopes.com and PolitiFact.com merit your attention as correctives to the flood of bogus and distorted information that inundates you every day.
More outsourcing: Apparently American lawyers now write so badly that it has become necessary to send their work to India to get the grammar cleaned up. Russell Smith, who helped set up SDD Global Solutions, the cleanup crew, remarks that “high-quality, effective English writing has been out of fashion in the U.S. for decades.” Tell me about it. If only we had people in this country who were knowledgeable about grammar and usage and who could edit texts for greater clarity and precision ...







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w/r/t Mencken, I suspect that the appetite for vituperation and scandal is a human universal. A quick glance at the popular press in the UK, for example, would seem to suggest this.
>"high-quality, effective English writing has been out of fashion in the U.S. for decades."
I'm going to go out on a limb here and suggest that in at least some disciplines -- tech writing being mine -- the quality of writing has in fact gotten substantially better. Compare a computer manual from the 70s to one from today, and I would be very surprised indeed if one found the academic style of the earlier era to result in a more usable text than the contemporary writing. I will, however, impose the qualification that we're only talking about text that's actually been edited.
Posted by: mike | August 3, 2010 2:39 PM
I'll go out on a limb too, like Mike, and suggest that Russell Smith really meant to say "high quality, effectively written English."
Posted by: Cliff | August 3, 2010 2:44 PM
Spare us the politically correct posturing about how the ground zero mosque is all about "freedom of religion." It's a bad idea, and the fact that so many people find it so offensive should give even the most die-hard liberal pause. But I guess they're too busy trying to figure out how a majority of Americans can support that nasty, racist Arizona law.
I like comedian Jim Norton's take best: A mosque at ground zero is "like building a Benihana's at Pearl Harbor."
Posted by: Gary | August 4, 2010 12:11 AM
Thanks, Cliff, but the English language already has high quality, so what we need is high-quality English writing, not high-quality English. :) I am grateful to the Indians for pointing that out to me.
Posted by: Russell Smith | August 4, 2010 1:30 AM
I notice that Gary's comment does not respond to the question in the post. Whether or not one likes the idea of a mosque near Ground Zero, how does one square opposition to it with the First Amendment?
Posted by: John McIntyre | August 4, 2010 1:39 AM
Perhaps if JEM knew anything about the opinions of the Imam in charge of this mosque to be, and the fact that no one knows about the source of the many millions needed, he might not be so keen on distracting us with the First Amendment. Said Amendment does have its limits, and I believe they include limiting a building which is propaganda writ several stores large, and several blocks too close to the former World Trade Center complex. Unfortunately, no one is trying to prevent the Imam spewing his love for Sharia law and El Kaida. They simply want him to spew it elsewhere. I don't see the Japanese attempting to build a Shinto temple on the site of the Arizona.
Posted by: Patricia the Terse | August 4, 2010 2:40 AM
"Unfortunately, no one is trying to prevent the Imam spewing his love for Sharia law and El Kaida."
Patricia the Terse
"I know Feisal Abdul Rauf; I've spoken with him at a public discussion at the 96th street mosque in New York about interfaith cooperation. He represents what Bin Laden fears most: a Muslim who believes that it is possible to remain true to the values of Islam and, at the same time, to be a loyal citizen of a Western, non-Muslim country. Bin Laden wants a clash of civilizations; the opponents of the mosque project are giving him what he wants."
Jeffrey Goldberg:
http://www.theatlantic.com/national/archive/2010/08/if-he-could-bin-laden-would-bomb-the-cordoba-initiative/60833/
Posted by: Sid Smith | August 4, 2010 7:00 AM
Is Patricia the Terse really suggesting that, not only should the government prohibit a church from building on an otherwise lawful site, it should also make its decision based on whether or not it likes the opinions of the cleric the church has chosen? Is she so "conservative" that she wants to return to the 17th century?
And Gary's response did not so much ignore the question of the First Amendment as reject it as annoying and trivial. So much for these defenders of the Constitution. As is so often the case, by dismissing such questions as "politically correct posturing," he only shows how little regard he has for justice and ethics.
Posted by: Rolig | August 4, 2010 7:18 AM
A mosque at ground zero is "like building a Benihana's at Pearl Harbor."I don't see the Japanese attempting to build a Shinto temple on the site of the Arizona.
According to Google Maps, the area around Pearl City, Hawaii, has its fair share of Japanese restaurants. And Shinto shrines were vandalized and Japanese people persecuted during and after the war.
But, as Mr. McIntyre noted, this misses the point anyway. But, in a way, it does answer the question: people are resorting to fear-mongering and demagoguery because they can't square this opposition with upholding the First Amendment.
Posted by: Jonathon | August 4, 2010 1:11 PM
Dang it. I must've messed up my blockquote tags. Those first two paragraphs should be quotes, while the next two paragraphs are mine.
Posted by: Jonathon | August 4, 2010 1:12 PM
I acknowledge that the mosque has a First Amendment right to be there; I never said it didn't. But that doesn't mean putting it there is the right thing to do. If the stated goal of said mosque is to promote "healing," as its backers claim, the goal is failing miserably.
Posted by: Gary | August 4, 2010 1:28 PM
The debate on the mosque has nothing do do with the government and religion: this should be decided by the people of New York City. And, incidentally, I notice the toadying Mayor Bloomberg thinks this is a fine idea. (He was never a real Republican: he changed parties when he ran after Giuliani couldn't seek another term.) And I see nothing in the First Amendment that quarantees any building the "right" to be anywhere. I don't think inanimate objects have rights anyway. Of course I want to return to the 17th century: I said so directly in my piece (ut supra) and naturally someone has quoted me directly. And I find it interesting although not surprising that Mr McIntyre paints people who consider themselves conservatives "bray(ing")whilst the other side presumably speaks in dulcet tones of sweet, tolerant reason. This is one of the problems with this space. It too often thinly disguises discussions on language, editing et al, as ways to talk about his politics. There are other places for political discussions. And the references to Pearl are not irrelevant. How about this one? Some Cistercian nuns had a chapel built on the site of Aushwitz: the Pope (previous Pope, I believe) asked them to vacate the premises, although I'm sure the order was in Medieval Latin. Although the nuns were there to pray for the souls of the tortured who suffered and died there, he thought it distracted from the place itself and all it represented. They left. This mosque, along with its swimming pool, and whatever politics its clergy hold, should go elsewhere.
Posted by: Patricia the Terse | August 5, 2010 2:24 AM
The debate about the mosque, I have to contradict, has everything to do with government and religion. Once this Muslim group has satisfied municipal zoning regulations and building codes, it has the same right to build and operate as any other religious group. That is what the First Amendment means. The people of New York City do not get to vote on what religions they like and dislike.
Whether Mr. Bloomberg is a real Republican or not is of no concern to me, or to the issue under discussion; he has grasped the essential point.
Before the Terse One or anyone else moves to dismiss me as a mealy-mouthed purveyor of political correctitude, I should point out that the First Amendment applies equally to, say, the Rev. Fred Phelps and his "God hates fags" demonstrations at the funerals of soldiers. Repellant and his theology and tactics are, the First Amendment protects him.
If braying is offensive rhetoric, I'll withdraw it and instead point out that for public officials to whip up anti-Muslim sentiment over this mosque is demagogy, plain and simple.
Posted by: John McIntyre | August 5, 2010 11:53 AM
The Permanent Mayor of New York City has not "grasped the essential point" regardless of JEM's assertions. He has pandered- such a good word - his way through 2-1/2 mayoral elections and seems to have the steam and arrogance to continue through another, if he can break or bend the law once again. But this debate is about fundamentalist Islamic terrorism and using euphemisms doesn't change that. Many Americans would hold the same objections if a Mosque were to be proposed at that grim place in rural Pennsylvania or in a part of the rebuilt wing in the Pentagon. The First Amendment does not allow you to do or say anything you wish. This reminds me of that ludicrous decision by a former Supreme Court about campaign finance. The Court ruled that speech and money are essentially the same for political purposes: most rational people would suggest that money is the means whereby, but not the thing itself. There have been protests against WalMarts and other large stores proposed in certain neighborhoods: are those people trying to violate WalMart's rights, or are they simply concerned for the places where they live and work?
Posted by: Patricia the Terse | August 5, 2010 5:03 PM
This is one of the problems with this space. It too often thinly disguises discussions on language, editing et al as ways to talk about politics. There are other places for political discussions.
And yet, Patricia the Terse, those are the posts about which you seems to have the most to say :-)
It is true, there are plenty of other blogs where one can discuss politics, but I have found very few where the discourse of all parties is as articulate and civil as on You Don't Say. Also, since language is one of the primary tools wielded by politicians, I find it useful to have a newspaper copy editor examine how words are used and misused in the political arena.
Posted by: Laura Lee | August 5, 2010 6:02 PM
I suggest that anyone who has evidence that the people involved with the mosque project are engaged in terrorist activities should approach the authorities instead of commenting on blogs.
I myself have no reason to think that, any more than I would have reason to think, say, that because the IRA enaged in terrorist acts, all Irishmen should be treated as potential terrorists, or that because IRA terrorists tended to be Roman Catholic, we should oppose construction of Roman Catholic churches lest we give comfort to the terrorists.
Posted by: John McIntyre | August 5, 2010 6:45 PM
To get back to language briefly, I was interested in your use of "demagogy." I don't think I would have used that word.
I'm more familiar with "demagoguery."
Not quite but close to being on topic, David Sullivan at That's the Press, Baby has an interesting post about the culture wars, Western guilt, tribalism, an more at:
http://davisullblog.blogspot.com/2010/08/ultimate-lightness-of-revolution.html
Finally, even the captcha is getting into the controversial; the phrase to decipher is "U.S. aborting."
Posted by: Barbara Phillips Long | August 5, 2010 10:11 PM
Bryan Garner calls demagogy a "needless variant" because demagoguery is twice as common. But I like demagogy for its closeness to the Greek, demagogia.
Posted by: John McIntyre | August 5, 2010 11:13 PM
I'm also inclined to wonder, if we are to accuse Mayor Bloomberg of pandering (for that vast Muslim vote?), what term remains to describe those who are callously whipping up anti-Muslim bigotry?
Posted by: John McIntyre | August 6, 2010 2:40 AM
Props to Laura Lee.
Posted by: Eve | August 6, 2010 9:33 AM
What Eve said.
And could we all just try to avoid hot button words such as "spewing" and "braying"? (Unless, of course, we get around to discussing eating contests and/or donkeys.)
Posted by: Dahlink | August 8, 2010 1:01 PM
The Irish-Catholics of New York City are not trying to build a church in a predominantly Jewish neighborhood. There are, however, Americans of Irish origin who have given money to the IRA long after the public knew the money was going to terrorists. That anyone thinks it is good politics, if you must use the word, to build a mosque anywhere near the former World Trade Center, has a short memory regarding not only September 11, but of all the other Islamic terrorists acts before and since. And yes, His Mayorship will pander to the Muslim vote. THe Democrats, regardless of how they may describe themselves from election to election, have a history of courting all minorities. And thank you Dahlink, for the anti-spewing & braying vote. Most unnecessary terms. It may be true that the political stuff gets my - and others'- attention. (I generally have something to say about Latin, but never mind.) The politics just distracts from the thesis of this column: language, and particularly as it relates to newspapers and the editing thereof. Dahlink, however, is quite right: no spewing and braying. Keith Ubermensch does quite enough of that.
Posted by: Patricia the Terse | August 9, 2010 1:31 AM
And what, please, is Benihana's?
Posted by: Patricia the Terse | August 9, 2010 1:34 AM
Patricia the T: Benihana's is a chain of Japanese restaurants (you can find them with a google search). They serve good food, and the chefs put on a great cooking show right at the table. It gives a whole new meaning to going out for dinner and a show.
Posted by: Tim | August 9, 2010 11:30 AM