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Strict, stricken, Strunk

In this, the last post I intend to write about The Elements of Style, I draw your attention to Geoffrey Pullum’s Language Log post with links to New York Times commentary on “the little book” by Language Hat, Grammar Girl and other eminences. Particularly telling is Language Hat’s evaluation of the beloved book as “the mangiest of stuffed owls.”

Of my own comments on the matter, I have only this to add. I have a sentimental recollection of encountering The Elements of Style at 18. But like many of the other delights one may recollect from youth — first loves, kir royales, amateur guitar playing — it does not hold up well on repeated encounter.

 

 

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A somewhat quaint though tremendously simplistic and paternalistic little book. It’s long past time to put it out to pasture. Or, you know, shoot it.

Or fix it. As I have done.

You're right. Who needs to be reminded about clarity, organization, and concision? No writers I know of.

I surmise that Mr. Blanco may not have taken the time to read the criticisms by Professor Pullum and the others, which, if I may summarize them, hold that bad advice, or good advice badly administered, will not benefit writers.

"Who needs to be reminded about clarity, organization, and concision? No writers I know of."

Good writers don't need to be reminded about these things, and a few bland and vague words of advice in a style manual won't be of much use to bad writers.

Is there a market for the kind of Strunk and White we wish it were?

Over the years, I have found that the people who quote this book the most have read it (or understood it) the least. Is it Scripture? It is not. Is it worth consulting? It is. (And cheers for the serial comma in Mr. Blanco's post.)

I've found the Strunk & White is a good reference but does not hold up well with the changes that have been made in language in the last 30 years. It's hard to dictate to people guidelines that are outdated and merely serve to make language more convoluted in contemporary speech and writing. I keep it as a knick-knack but little else other than that.

Hi. Based on this interesting post, I thought you might be interested in seeing my note post regarding Strunk, White, and EOS. I hope you enjoy it.

http://blog.textarts.com/2009/04/strunk-and-white-elements-of-style.html

Best regards,
Mark Garvey

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John McIntyre, mild-mannered copy editor for a great metropolitan newspaper, has fussed over writers’ work at The Baltimore Sun since 1986. He is the director of its copy desk, an affiliate faculty member at Loyola College of Maryland, a former president of the American Copy Editors Society, a native of Kentucky, a graduate of Michigan State and Syracuse, and a moderate prescriptivist. If you are inspired by a spirit of contradiction, comment on his posts or write to him at john.mcintyre@baltsun.com.

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