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October 6, 2008

Austin Camacho on black detectives

Austin CamachoAll week, we'll feature visitors from Bouchercon's Charmed to Death international conference of mystery writers (for all their posts, click here). Here's Washington author Austin Camacho, discussing how far race goes in defining his characters. His topic: Black Ain’t Nothing But a Detective’s Color. 

"It’s not about race. It’s about the characters. It’s about the mystery.”

That statement has become a mantra for me since I started writing detective fiction. Hannibal Jones, my fictional private eye, lives and works in Washington DC. Yes, he has African ancestors. He is also a hardboiled gumshoe in the MacDonald mold – Ross or John D., take your pick. He describes himself as a troubleshooter, a defender of the weak. In this sense his literary forebears include Simon Templar and Travis McGee. The archetype is familiar and the conventions clear. I take great pride in the complex, clue-laden puzzles I have crafted for novels like Blood and Bone and Collateral Damage. Yet when people talk about Hannibal’s stories, they always want to call him a Black detective, as if that were its own genre.

If my work must fall into a subgenre, let it just be hardboiled detective fiction. That means my hero lives in a dark, gritty world. It’s the part of the world most of us don’t visit much. Organized crime is a powerful force there, part of an underworld subculture. Violence is an everyday thing; corruption is everywhere; and people tend to be hostile instead of helpful. It takes a special kind of man to walk though all that muck and not get dirty. Hannibal Jones is such a man, and contemporary Washington D.C. is such a place. True, the District does have a large African American population, and that does mean that crime is organized differently. Violence grows from different motivations, and racial tension is the source of much of hostility in the District. The fact that Hannibal works in the African American community means he can’t do things exactly as Sam Spade did.

There’s also a social element to hardboiled detective stories. They often revolve around the friction between upper crust society and the lower economic levels. The relatively honest, survival crime of the streets meets the higher level corruption of the wealthy or political elite. Early writers illustrated this in San Francisco. Both Hammett and Chandler created tales of petty thieves and confidence men getting used and then destroyed by corrupt businessmen. I try to work the same elements on the East Coast, where Washington D.C.’s poor live side by side with the upper class. The conflict is real, and it takes a special man to walk in both worlds without getting crushed between the two. Sometimes one group is disadvantaged more because of color than income, and having money doesn’t automatically propel a person into the upper class. In fact, a black man or woman who is financially successful may face prejudice from both sides. Hannibal, born of an African American solder and his German national wife straddles all these lines, but never really fits into any one camp.

These stories always include action, and it’s often brutal. The hero has to be able to take a beating as rough as one he might hand out. Unlike TV, people really get hurt and the reader sees it up close. Fans of these stories know what really happens when a bullet hits a man in the chest, or a fist smacks against someone’s jaw. And the effect is the same from a white fist as it is from a black one, isn’t it? Except that bystanders are more likely to choose a side if they look like one of the fighters and not the other, or if they perceive the attack to be a hate crime. So, even a simple fight scene must be written differently if the combatants are different colors. Even if they’re not, African Americans do it differently. More trash talk, fewer bottles or car antennas, and a very different style of knife-fighting.

Like all good storytelling, hard-boiled stories revolve around the characters. This is largely because the detective is neither Sherlock Holmes nor a CSI. Forensic evidence is seldom the clincher in his cases. He solves the mystery by talking to people, lots of them, and they’re all lying. He does the legwork, collecting a boatload of facts, hoping that eventually he’ll see a pattern or turn up a clue. Everything hinges on the motives and personalities of the cast. For this kind of writing to work, all the people in a story must be well rounded and fully developed. They all have their flaws, and most have a spark of decency too. Surely that much is the same no matter race, color or creed. Except that, just because Hannibal’s skin is dark, some people are more likely to open up to him while others will refuse to speak to him, or will lie to him out of pure spite. If my writing is honest, I have to take into account that human motivations really do vary based on race. The basics are the same – love, hate, greed, jealousy. But race adds the elements of prejudice, fear of the establishment, distrust of those who are different, and blind faith in total strangers based on traits in common. A racially diverse cast really does complicate the puzzles I build, and I have to admit that I love having those additional hues on my mystery-writing pallet. How does race complicate things?

Of course, the most important defining characteristic of hardboiled detective fiction is the detective himself. He knows there’s a job to do, and he’s the only one who can get it done. He may be a tough guy, but he knows what’s right and wrong. He’s on a quest for the truth, or justice, or simply against the evil of the world. He has a clearly defined moral code, even if it’s only clear to him. He may shoot a man in cold blood, but he’ll never park in a handicap space, dishonor a lady or turn his back on a person in real trouble. Like most of his peers, Hannibal is not well-off financially, because in his world, being moral doesn’t pay very well. But how did our hero get to be this impoverished paragon? Surely his personal history shaped his character. The fact that Hannibal is a black man in a white man’s world shapes him just as much as the fact that he was raised by his mother after his father died in Vietnam and has little feel for the hip hop, red-black-and-green, whitey-distrusting culture of his neighbors. Hardboiled detectives are always outsiders, but in the case of black detectives it’s easy to understand why. White clients may expect them to have a hidden, anti-white agenda. Other African Americans, distrustful of authority figures in general, sometimes have a special resentment of black men who question them or try to associate them with crimes.

Okay, one thing must be the same across all hardboiled detectives - his style. It’s his air of relaxed confidence, whether he’s talking to a Rockefeller or a Capone, and the deadpan wit that’s so dry it crackles. So when the dame says, "Tall, aren’t you?" Marlowe doesn’t say "Yeah," or "So what?" but rather... "I didn’t mean to be." Hannibal might respond the same way if someone mentioned that he’s black. When a client’s butler calls him a colorful character he says, “I’m just me. You’re the guy that’s colorful.” And he recognizes the shade of difference between just being a P.I. and being a black one. So, when asked what kind of detective he is in Damaged Goods he quips, “I’m like the illegitimate child of Spenser and Hawk, if it was possible for them to do such a thing.”

Ultimately, the reader identifies with the hero of these stories, which are most often written in first person. You have the detective’s point of view. For him to be accessible to his audience his viewpoint, attitudes and feelings must be true. This is especially important for a black detective because those who would most naturally identify with him have been largely disenfranchised in this regard. It’s a lot easier for an African American to identify with Hawk than Spenser, but the choice of blacks in detective fiction is still disturbingly narrow.

So maybe, in a way it is about race. Because it’s about the characters more than it’s about the mystery.

Austin S. Camacho is the author of four detective novels in the Hannibal Jones series - Blood and Bone, Collateral Damage, The Troubleshooter, and Damaged. Camacho is active in several writers’ organizations and teaches writing at Anne Arundel Community College. After a career as a military news reporter, Camacho is now a public affairs specialist for the Defense Department. Camacho lives in Springfield, Virginia with his lovely wife Denise and Princess the Wonder Cat.

Posted by Dave Rosenthal at 1:00 PM | | Comments (5)
Categories: Bouchercon/Charmed to Death, Meet the Author
        

Comments

Wonderful post Austin! I'm so glad I stopped by!

Terrific blog! As a first time novelist, I am working hard on developing my characters because I know they are the most important aspect of the story. So, I'm glad to read all about the character you have and how you view him. And it's motivational to read about others writing.

Thanks!

Thanks for the support, Scott! The whole trick is to know what makes your character like everyone else, AND what makes him or her unique. Hit my web site - www.ascamacho.com and click thru to my own blog, "Another Writer's Life" to see how I feel about writing.

I hope you have a great time at Bouchercon, Austin. I wish I could be there, but I have no vacation time left from work.

Darn that day job. It keeps getting in the way.

Great post!
Morgan Mandel

I couldn't have said it better myself, Austin. If only the whole world operated according to your credo! Ethnicity can broaden a reader's horizons, but not if it becomes insular.
Well done!

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Dave Rosenthal came to The Baltimore Sun as a business reporter in 1987 and now is the Maryland Editor. He reads a wide range of books (but never as many as he'd like), usually alternating between non-fiction and fiction. Some all-time favorites: A Confederacy of Dunces by John Kennedy Toole; Wind, Sand and Stars by Antoine de Saint-Exupery; and anything by Calvin Trillin or John McPhee. He belongs to a book club with a Jewish theme.
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